‘The Freak’ character description by Otter16

Dim lights lit up the small boy’s face revealing the grotesque growths planted beside his nose. His body was covered in scars and boils making him a ‘freak’. Swelling day by day, his large, bulbous nose, dominated over all his facial features. Despite his huge nose, his nostrils were smaller than a baby’s fingernail making it difficult for him to breathe.

Despite his facial features, his hands were slender and gentle, carving slowly into a piece of  wood to create elephants and birds and all things beautiful. He was more of an artist than a ‘freak’. The tips of his fingers traced the bark like he had been doing this his whole life. He was no ‘freak’.

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One Response to ‘The Freak’ character description by Otter16

  1. KW says:

    I like the way you have contrasted the ‘ugliness’ of the boy’s face with the beauty of his skilled hands and talent for wood-carving. You have created a powerful description to steer the reader to understand that the boy is not a ‘freak’ but a gentle, talented artist and that it would not take much for someone to appreciate this if they looked at him properly.

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